Sunday, September 03, 2006

ஒரு கவிதை...

After a long time, I tried a kavithat in tamil.. here is the result:...

மாலை நேரம்
சாலை ஓரம்
விடைப்பெற்றது சிவப்பு நிலா
நாளை வருகிறேன் என்று....

3 comments:

Aravindh said...

machi....expert correction to your kavithai...last lineku apram put these line

"Ei tandanakka....Ei tanaku nakka"

engaluku ipdi mudichaathaan kavithai pudikum ;)

Krishna Ram Kuttuva Jeyaram said...

ha ha ha..puthu kavithaile ithu nalla fit aaguthu da..

Ponniyinselvan/karthikeyan(1981-2005 ) said...

i am surprised to see the august 26 post appearing in between.i have posted my comment there.see if you get it